Dear Nadia
Three of the standards are not met.
US data residency is there at clause 9.1. Breach notice at 9.4 is 5 business days, not 72 hours; I have revised it to 72 hours with your policy quoted in the margin for CloudVault's counsel. There is no audit right at all; I have inserted the standard clause, annual on 30 days notice, with reliance on their SOC report in between. Liability at 12 is capped at 6 months of fees, below your standard of 12, and is redlined.
The dates. Non-renewal requires written notice 60 days before the anniversary under clause 3.2, so for a 1 March anniversary the last day is 31 December. The renewal price increase at 4.3 is capped at 7 percent, above your standard of 5, and is redlined. Both dates are recorded on the matter.
Leela