Dear Daniel
There are 16 issues across the two documents, of which 5 concern playbook positions with no fallback.
Liability is uncapped in Northfield's draft. I have capped it at 12 months of fees, with 18 months available as a fallback if they press. The IP clause at 9.2 assigns improvements to the platform to Northfield, which is a walk-away position, so I have replaced it with the licence-back language and explained why in the margin. The security schedule requires breach notice within 24 hours; I have revised it to 72 and noted that 48 is the fallback. The most favoured customer clause at 4.5 is deleted. Renewal is annual with a 3 percent cap on price increases in their draft; the playbook permits 5, and I have left 3 as an open issue for you rather than redline it, since it is a commercial point.
You can agree on the call: the 18-month cap, 48-hour notice and the 5 percent renewal cap. You cannot agree the IP assignment or the MFN clause without Asha. Both are recorded as open.
Leela