Dear Tom
There are 14 issues, 6 of them in Articles 10 and 11.
The indemnity at 10.1 is drafted as mutual but the definition of Contractor Group at 1.8 includes your subcontractors and their invitees while Company Group at 1.6 excludes Caprock's other contractors, so the allocation is not symmetrical. I have aligned the two definitions and quoted both in the margin. The pollution clause at 10.4 places all pollution risk on the contractor; I have restored the standard split, with pollution originating below the rotary table at the operator's risk. The equipment clause at 10.6 makes you bear loss of tools in the hole at your cost; I have revised it to replacement cost at Caprock's risk while the equipment is in the hole, which is your standard position, with depreciated value as the fallback. The insurance schedule omits the waiver of subrogation and the additional insured endorsements that make the indemnities work; both are restored. The consequential loss exclusion at 10.8 is one-sided and I have made it mutual.
One point is open for you. Caprock asks for a 24-month warranty on services at 7.2, against your standard 12. I have not redlined it.
Leela