Dear Asha
There are 12 issues. The three you named are connected and I have treated them as one set.
Incident notice at Schedule 3, paragraph 4 is 12 hours from discovery in Vantage's markup, against the playbook standard of 72 and fallback of 48. Breach liability at MSA 13.4 is carved out of the cap entirely; the playbook permits a super-cap of 3 times fees for data incidents and nothing beyond it. Audit rights at 14.2 permit audits at any time on 5 business days notice; the standard is annual on 30 days, with a right for Vantage to rely on your SOC report in between. I have redlined each to the standard and noted in the margin that the three are offered together: 48-hour notice, the 3 times super-cap and annual audit with the report, which is the fallback set. The markup also redefines Security Incident at paragraph 1 to include unsuccessful attempts, which would make the notice obligation unworkable; I have restored the confirmed-compromise definition.
The remaining issues are drafting and within the fallback, except the source code escrow at 18.1, which is open for you.
Leela